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ANC Passage Master 12-1-06

December 1st, 2006 · 1 Comment
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This stroy is about Mary Lou Finney how she has to write a diary over the summer. in the first paragraph she talks about her family. Sam Finney is the father he is a regular father he works as a geologist and during the day he draws maps. Sally Finnely is the mother she is a pretty normal mom. She is a oral Historian. When the kids drive her crazy she sometimes cry. Maggie finney seventeen years old. She drives Mary crazy and she is older than mary. Dennis Finnely twelve years old he always get in trouble but hes okay other than that.



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  • 1    Ms. Fink // Dec 2, 2006 at 10:48 am

    You write good descriptions of each family member, but you didn’t write about Dougie. Also, you need to check punctuation, spelling and capitalization. Some of your sentences are run-ons - you need to make them into two sentences with a period.

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